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I knew in my heart that we were going to die. Even as he held me close I was positive that there was no way out of this. We were huddled closely in a deep snow bank trying not to move… trying not to make a sound. If we did the hunter would surely hear us.

I had never imagined that this is how it would end for me; but, in all honesty, I had not imagined any of the things that had happened to me in the past few weeks. Life had seemed like a surreal dream, but I was in for a rude awakening.

I had learned at an early age good things never lasted long.

The only sense of peace was knowing that Alice was safe. She was not out here in this storm. She was protected in the police station with Adam… Even if I didn’t survive she would live on. Though thinking of my only daughter alone in the world was not something I wanted to consider.

But there was no choice; it was our lives or hers. And as I looked into the eyes of the only man I ever loved I knew he was well aware of that too. There was nothing left to do but wait for the end to come, and by the sound of the crunching footsteps just down the street it was coming soon.
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Chapter One: [link]

~ IMPORTANT-PLEASE READ~

Well this is the beginning to the story that should be published by March of next year. I'm going to be posting a little preview up here, maybe the first few chapters, or just the Prologue and the first chapter, but I don't know yet. Well here is the Prologue anyways- I really hope you like it. Tell me what you think it's really important

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:iconwerewolf-moon:
I like this...Leaves you wondering what has happened.

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I never thought dreams could be reached, in till I looked in to the stars.
:iconisiliel922:
Thank you =) That's what I'm shooting for. I want the reader to be hooked xD
:iconwerewolf-moon:
Your welcome. =] I figured that's what you were doing.

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I never thought dreams could be reached, in till I looked in to the stars.
:iconwanderingartist:
I think this is a great beginning. If I picked this off the shelf and read just this part I would want to read the rest.

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~Zexy-Guys
wondering how much validity the evil genius has
:iconisiliel922:
Thank you very much, that was what I was going for. =)

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Please tell me how my story is coming along!!
:iconwanderingartist:
Tell me, is it sci fi, fiction, nonfiction?

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~Zexy-Guys
wondering how much validity the evil genius has
:iconisiliel922:
occult fiction =)
If you haven't read it yet Chapter one is up too

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Please tell me how my story is coming along!!
:iconwanderingartist:
Oh I'll have to read it, I must have missed it somehow.

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~Zexy-Guys
wondering how much validity the evil genius has
:iconisiliel922:
alright ^.^ It's really long as a warning

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Please tell me how my story is coming along!!

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